Quote Of The Week Whenever I Feel Like Updating It (last updated 1/17/12)
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Originally Posted by Phase
That guy was badass! He was like, "Oh! Oh, you're gonna try to Chuck Norris me, I'll just Chuck Norris you!" Unfortunately, I am the best Chuck Norris since Chuck Norris.
Which is saying something, considering that Chuck Norris... was Chuck Norris.
You know, the first 3 were very good on artwork. I understand that he quit because of being unable to post because of being unable to update at a reasonable rate. But perhaps he could improve the ones that have come out on his own time. Just a thought.
Very nice comic, Onasuma. The artwork is fantastic. If I might make a few suggestions, once you are back to work on this...?
Using the spellcheck tool will help with the comic greatly. The humor tends to be marred by the typos and punctuation errors.
If possible, go back to using Comic Sans MS for the font, and not Ariel/Times New Roman. It just looks better.
Finally, when possible, update the front page with the current comics. Otherwise, it'll look like a dead comic, and the new updates may be missed by people who look over the first page.
That's it. I think that C2H5OH has a lot of potential, and some truly great artwork. I'll be ready for the next update!
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You know, the first 3 were very good on artwork. I understand that he quit because of being unable to post because of being unable to update at a reasonable rate. But perhaps he could improve the ones that have come out on his own time. Just a thought.
Askaris doesnt want to keep going on with this comic. My art is perfectly passable. I hope that answers your question.
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Originally Posted by SandyCaesar
Very nice comic, Onasuma. The artwork is fantastic. If I might make a few suggestions, once you are back to work on this...?
Using the spellcheck tool will help with the comic greatly. The humor tends to be marred by the typos and punctuation errors.
If possible, go back to using Comic Sans MS for the font, and not Ariel/Times New Roman. It just looks better.
Finally, when possible, update the front page with the current comics. Otherwise, it'll look like a dead comic, and the new updates may be missed by people who look over the first page.
That's it. I think that C2H5OH has a lot of potential, and some truly great artwork. I'll be ready for the next update!
I do use a checker and I also have Askaris proof read things. But yeah, its still not good.
Font wise, meh, I dont see that mattering. The art style is a variation on the standard oots style.
and yeah, I should update the front page some time. In fact, Ill do it now. <<< Done it
Quote Of The Week Whenever I Feel Like Updating It (last updated 1/17/12)
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Originally Posted by Phase
That guy was badass! He was like, "Oh! Oh, you're gonna try to Chuck Norris me, I'll just Chuck Norris you!" Unfortunately, I am the best Chuck Norris since Chuck Norris.
Which is saying something, considering that Chuck Norris... was Chuck Norris.
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