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12-23-2007, 08:34 AM
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Ogre in the Playground
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Chaos Laws
Chaos Laws.
The most irrational, political incorrect, insane and bloody oots-styled webcomic ITP.
STARTING NOW!
Updates 2-3 times a week.
Introduction might be a bit boring, but its needed to understand whats going later on. the story starts before the "heroes" (wow, thats a bad definition here.) are first shown, slightly before any of them is born actually.
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Chapter one, Genesis
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2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.
Last edited by boomwolf : 12-25-2007 at 05:57 AM .
12-23-2007, 08:37 AM
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Ettin in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
You may want to change from a yellow font on a white/gray background, it's really tricky to read
12-23-2007, 08:54 AM
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Firbolg in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
I love the Old english font too, but please use white...
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you would make an awesome propagandist for Kobolds.
12-23-2007, 09:05 AM
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Titan in the Playground
Re: Chaos Laws
This is looking pretty good
But I would use blue for the font.
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Dear Princess Celestia,
You faithful student,
Nameless
12-23-2007, 09:16 AM
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
Note taken, will look for ways to make it clearer without ruining it. (it has to be yellow. maybe darker BG?)
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2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.
12-23-2007, 09:19 AM
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Titan in the Playground
Re: Chaos Laws
Maybe a musterd colour?
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Dear Princess Celestia,
You faithful student,
Nameless
12-23-2007, 09:21 AM
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
Maybe...I'll run tests until Tuesday. (the next page release. Its done by now, but I want to have a reserve in case I cant make some for a time for some reason.)
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2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.
12-23-2007, 03:30 PM
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Ettin in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
Oh look, Nobody's down there with the little mortals
12-25-2007, 05:55 AM
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
Get used to see people like ABR people around, but they will always take a minor role.
NEXT PAGE!
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2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.
12-25-2007, 10:43 AM
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Barbarian in the Playground
Re: Chaos Laws
Revelations isn't very believable, yeah.
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I have just two words for Erfworld:
God Mode.
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Have you ever considered that such a convenient solution doesn't exist in the real world?
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"We are the people our parents warned us about..."- Jimmy Buffett
The Generica Chronicles
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12-26-2007, 10:09 AM
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
I know, You thought the "john" on the chapter logo was someone else?
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2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.
12-26-2007, 01:38 PM
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
Must...resist...urge...to go on...Christian rant...
I've read Revelation about 12 times (no exaggeration). I know everything there is to know about it, and I really, really want to contest you about that comic.
But I like this comic and don't want it locked.
@V: Seriously, be careful about this. Too many religion jokes (especially talking about being an atheist, etc.) could get this thread locked.
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Original Tornatar by Threeshades. Second Tornatar by The Chilli God. Demonized Tornatar by Threeshades.
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12-26-2007, 02:48 PM
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Re: Chaos Laws
Well, this IS parody, and I SAID its politically incorrect in many points.
In any case, a part of the "religion jokes" is coming from me being an athiest, and the type that sees religion as a joke. (but being born as a jew I allowed myself a jew-jitsu joke back in ABR.)
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2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.
01-18-2008, 05:51 AM
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Ettin in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
Du-dudu...
04-25-2008, 03:29 PM
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Ogre in the Playground
Re: Chaos Laws
I'm sorry, but you gotta change that font. I have no idea what the punch line is in the second page.
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"Okay, what the heck?"
"You are ?____? now."
"I signed nothing."
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Well, this IS parody, and I SAID its politically incorrect in many points.
That don't matter to the mods if comments regarding religious topics get out of hand (as they often can in parodies)
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04-25-2008, 03:34 PM
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Firbolg in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
Doubt that he will be taking advices, since this is a dead thread...
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you would make an awesome propagandist for Kobolds.
05-24-2008, 04:43 AM
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Ettin in the Playground
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Re: Chaos Laws
A shame really, he seemed pretty stoked about this.
...oh darn. Well I was reading through the index anyways...
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