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Old 12-23-2007, 08:34 AM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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Chaos Laws.
The most irrational, political incorrect, insane and bloody oots-styled webcomic ITP.

STARTING NOW!

Updates 2-3 times a week.
Introduction might be a bit boring, but its needed to understand whats going later on. the story starts before the "heroes" (wow, thats a bad definition here.) are first shown, slightly before any of them is born actually.

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2117: No matter how good a debater I am out of character there is no way to logically get out of falling after your paladin kills his patron god.

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Old 12-23-2007, 08:37 AM   Top  -  End  -  #2
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You may want to change from a yellow font on a white/gray background, it's really tricky to read
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Old 12-23-2007, 08:54 AM   Top  -  End  -  #3
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I love the Old english font too, but please use white...
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Old 12-23-2007, 08:59 AM   Top  -  End  -  #4
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I like the fact that the first chapter is called Genenis, this is done to often. Really cool and all.
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Old 12-23-2007, 09:05 AM   Top  -  End  -  #5
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This is looking pretty good

But I would use blue for the font.
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Old 12-23-2007, 09:16 AM   Top  -  End  -  #6
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Note taken, will look for ways to make it clearer without ruining it. (it has to be yellow. maybe darker BG?)
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Old 12-23-2007, 09:19 AM   Top  -  End  -  #7
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Maybe a musterd colour?
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Old 12-23-2007, 09:21 AM   Top  -  End  -  #8
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Maybe...I'll run tests until Tuesday. (the next page release. Its done by now, but I want to have a reserve in case I cant make some for a time for some reason.)
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Old 12-23-2007, 03:30 PM   Top  -  End  -  #9
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Oh look, Nobody's down there with the little mortals
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Old 12-25-2007, 05:55 AM   Top  -  End  -  #10
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Get used to see people like ABR people around, but they will always take a minor role.

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Old 12-25-2007, 10:43 AM   Top  -  End  -  #11
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Revelations isn't very believable, yeah.
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Old 12-26-2007, 10:09 AM   Top  -  End  -  #12
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I know, You thought the "john" on the chapter logo was someone else?
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Old 12-26-2007, 01:38 PM   Top  -  End  -  #13
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Must...resist...urge...to go on...Christian rant...

I've read Revelation about 12 times (no exaggeration). I know everything there is to know about it, and I really, really want to contest you about that comic.

But I like this comic and don't want it locked.

@V: Seriously, be careful about this. Too many religion jokes (especially talking about being an atheist, etc.) could get this thread locked.
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Old 12-26-2007, 02:48 PM   Top  -  End  -  #14
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Well, this IS parody, and I SAID its politically incorrect in many points.

In any case, a part of the "religion jokes" is coming from me being an athiest, and the type that sees religion as a joke. (but being born as a jew I allowed myself a jew-jitsu joke back in ABR.)
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Du-dudu...
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Old 04-25-2008, 03:29 PM   Top  -  End  -  #16
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I'm sorry, but you gotta change that font. I have no idea what the punch line is in the second page.

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Well, this IS parody, and I SAID its politically incorrect in many points.
That don't matter to the mods if comments regarding religious topics get out of hand (as they often can in parodies)

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Doubt that he will be taking advices, since this is a dead thread...
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Old 05-24-2008, 04:43 AM   Top  -  End  -  #18
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A shame really, he seemed pretty stoked about this.

...oh darn. Well I was reading through the index anyways...
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