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Ogre in the Playground
Join Date: Aug 2007
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Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Dawn of Yesterday
Newest Comic: Archive: Character Bios, Organizations and Other Information: Characters: Organizations: Other: Bonus Things: Banners: Old Archive:
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Episode 1:
Episode 2:
Episode 3:
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Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
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If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
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Last edited by Fay Graydon : 05-12-2010 at 09:41 AM .
Reason: I'm rebooting the story line.
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Barbarian in the Playground
Join Date: Jan 2008
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
I like the beginning. I wan't to see more.
EDIT: Whoo! First reply!
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Last edited by _Puppetmaster_ : 11-14-2008 at 07:54 AM .
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Firbolg in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Have a nice trip; see you next
fall .
Cool blur effects by the way.
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Ogre in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Looking great ! I like the fact that you used a different perspective when the guy fell. May your comic will enjoy a lot of strips !
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Thank you for the kind words.
And I've made the comics first banner (I will make more at a later date)
and remember...
Prism Tech Industries is here for you
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Originally Posted by
Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
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Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
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I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Not half bad. I can envision this lasting a while.
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Titan in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
You may of have completely ripped off The Matrix, but this is pretty damn awesome.
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
You know Nameless, I never actually thort of the Matrix whilst doing this comic...
but now you mention it, I must admit there are quite a lot of similarities.....
ah well
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Originally Posted by
Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
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Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
[s]
I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
New comic:
(sorry for any complications)
[hr]will except auditions for cameos
(ABR people will have to PM me with an explanation of why they would be on another planet almost 2000 years before the events of FFF)
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Originally Posted by
Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
[s]
I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
Last edited by Fay Graydon : 11-15-2008 at 01:02 PM .
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Firbolg in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Poor guy.
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Ogre in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
You accept cameos ? Wonderful !
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Titan in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
CAMEO FOR NAMELESS! CAMEO FOR NAMELESS!
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
*Sends cameo PM*
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Troll in the Playground
Join Date: Feb 2007
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Garbsen, Germany
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Looks neat so far. But I disagree with the "whole episode in one spoiler"-layout. It will make it incredibly bothersome to read when you have to find where in that huge column of comic you left last time so you can go on reading. It's already becoming apparent with only the second strip. And it surely wont get any better with ten of them. So rather put sub-spoilers for each page into the episode spoiler.
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
I've just realised that no matter what I do, the third comic comes out wrong
In the last pannel it says:
"...I was going to send
YOU help..."
when its actually meant to be:
"...I was going to send
FOR help..."
This is what it's meant to look like:
COMIC
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Originally Posted by
Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
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Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
[s]
I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
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Firbolg in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Um... which comic has "send you help"? I don't see it...
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
The one in the archive
:(
My laptop is not a happy laptop at the moment...
Ive just booted it up for the last 20 mins and got the BSOD ever 4 or 5 mins
EDIT:
@V
How very odd, because they all say "send you help" for me...
what does everyone else see them as?
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Originally Posted by
Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
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Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
[s]
I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
Last edited by Fay Graydon : 11-15-2008 at 03:48 PM .
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Firbolg in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
They all look the same to me; "Send for help".
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
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Originally Posted by
Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
[s]
I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Coo', I like the sci-fi theme. Can't wait to see more.
Not to sound like a callous ass hole, but when exactly will my cameo be?
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Originally Posted by
OverWilliam
Man, every time you think 'could this stuff POSSIBLY get any cooler,' Vulion takes yet
another level in Badass.
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Originally Posted by
Fredthefighter
Thanks Vulion, you're awesome.Vulion, Awesome Incarnate, coming to an art request near you.
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Originally Posted by
Calamity
Also, I'm surprised this thread hasn't exploded due to over-awesomeness yet Vul.
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
*Checks PM inbox*
you havnt sent me any information about your cameo...
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Originally Posted by
Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
[s]
I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
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Fayt
*Checks PM inbox*
you havnt sent me any information about your cameo...
...AMNESIA DUST!!!
*runs off*
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
OverWilliam
Man, every time you think 'could this stuff POSSIBLY get any cooler,' Vulion takes yet
another level in Badass.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Fredthefighter
Thanks Vulion, you're awesome.Vulion, Awesome Incarnate, coming to an art request near you.
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Originally Posted by
Calamity
Also, I'm surprised this thread hasn't exploded due to over-awesomeness yet Vul.
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Firbolg in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
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Titan in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
oooh... Shiny Comic.
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I don't know if you've noticed, but pretty much everything BRC posts is full of awesome.
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So, Astronaut, War Hero, or hideous Mantis Man, hop to it! The future of humanity is in your capable hands and or terrifying organic scythes.
My Homebrew:
Synchronized Swordsmen ,
Dual Daggers ,
The Doctor ,
The Preacher ,
The Brawler
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Firbolg in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
That "to the hospital" banner should have
expressions.
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Bugfalcon and banner drawn by me.
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you would make an awesome propagandist for Kobolds.
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Banned
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
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memnarch
Nah, I think I can fit it in. Ovu Monobi has numerous resources, it wouldn't be that hard to send one of his followers to another world.
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Yes it's that time of the week again!
Happy times!
Here's a new comic
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Originally Posted by
Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
[s]
I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
Last edited by Fay Graydon : 11-21-2008 at 08:20 PM .
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Firbolg in the Playground
Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
Say, this looks similar to The Emperor's room in Star Wars.
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Prediction; my cameo character will either; A) never be seen/heard of again, or B) end up dead.
Another prediction; Aaron and Fayte will have multiple run-ins with this hunter android, each time worse than the last.
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
I like it i like it alot
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Great artist, I'm assuming clinically insane as hes willing to draw for me. Also, *cracks whip* WHAT ARE YOU DOING OUT OF YOUR BOX, I TOLD YOU TO DRAW FASTER!
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)
sorry for missing not 1 but 2 updates.........
but I'll make it up to you guys tomorrow...
Ive been having a...... time...
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Deth Muncher
+1 to Fay being awesome, causing nosebleeds and etc.
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Originally Posted by
Raz_Fox
If Fay Graydon is visible to a male target, she deals d6 Nosebleed Damage per turn.
[s]
I'm an Artist!, If you want an Avatar just PM me your specifics - Avatar by Me!
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