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#31
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Re: Shards of Siberys
We all have to start with something and noone is born a master. Maybe find something beyond MSpaint.
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#32
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
New comic is up...
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#33
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
It's always good to see Eberron stuff
A few critiques on the revised first comic:
When resizing text, hold the Ctrl key to make sure it stays in proportion, otherwise the text looks strangely flat or thin. This was sorted out in the second comic as I wrote this message
Also, I'd reccomend not using the .jpg format for your work, or if you do, reducing the level of compression. The compression artifacts really harm the comic as it is now - .jpg generally isn't good for OOTS-style work. I reccomend using the .png format, or .gif (which is what the Giant uses).
Finally, I'd modify the size and proportions of the eyes somewhat, to make them a bit more like the OOTS eyes. Simply making them thinner would work.
The writing is excellent, though. Indeed, good work all-round
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#34
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Thanks... i noticed that the eyes don't look right :D will fix in future comics. And I use .JPG for space-related issues.. I'll try .PNG hope to get better results..
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#35
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
damn, now this was funny ! Especially because I didnt expected it...
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#36
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
:D tehnically it does :D
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#37
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Added a 5'th character :) working on next strip
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#38
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Wasnt the fifth one banned ?
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#39
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
He was but i want to re-do that strip ..it's important enough not to overlook it :D ... although i think i'm going to replace the Artificer with another PC :P
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#40
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
I had a look at your old strips and must say that the re-do is way much better, keep it up
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#41
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Will there be a shifter ?
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#42
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
I think i'll drop a spoiler now ..the 3'rd character (the dual-axe guy) actualy has a set of fangs.. No more spoilers now :D
Last edited by Hacktor : 02-19-2008 at 09:28 AM .
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#43
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
So, when will the next comic be done ?
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#44
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
When i get home from work :D
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#45
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New comic is up :D
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#46
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Was that a 5 foot step and unarmed strike? Is he a monk? Does he have the Improved unarmed strike feat? Find out, later !
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#47
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Or he just has a few ranks in tumble and used an untrained unarmed strike out of the reach of a longspear :) find out ...even later :)
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#48
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
made this strip look better (removed the outlines..made some smaller eyes for him :D) ,,anyhow ... what do you think?
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#49
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
By the way ..i want an opinion please. Does it look better with the thick borders or without? Thanks
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#50
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Check out the new banner ... :D
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#51
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Just so you know, I'm pretty sure that banner doesn't fit in with the forum rules. A banner can't be over 120 pixels in height.
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#52
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
The fish is correct about the banner
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#53
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Just a note: Failing Saves' banner is over 120 pixels in height...
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#54
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
OK I will modify it do just under 120 pixels high :) thanks for the tip.:P by the way Salmon ,,any word on a new comic for Failing-saves? you've been at 42 since friday:P
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#55
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Fixed the banner :D although it looks kinda small :(
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#56
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
I like it...when I will get some room in my sig, I will add it
now, GET A COMIC DONE
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#57
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Thing is while i'm at work i can only work onm small things like characters and banners and whatnot...no time .. in the evening i can and usualy work on a comic :D so expect one by tonight :D bayar ...can you contact me via messenger please.. I need to talk to you.
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#58
Bugbear in the Playground
Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
I had a look at comic #3 and just wanted to say that the art is getting better, keep it up and get some more done
Does every protagonist get a brief two strip intro, I wonder?
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#59
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
Not every protagonist need one ... i'm sure after the 4'th strip you'll se why i did that :)
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Re: Shards of Siberys - An Eberron webcomic
New Comic is up! :D
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