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Old 04-05-2008, 06:42 AM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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Alright guys, I was really undecided about making this or not, but your encouragements and the precious help of Goats_o_Mjolnir (thanks pal, for everything) gave me enough motivation to start this project.
This is NOT a comic about me, but a lot of what happens in the comic is inspired by events happened during actual gaming sessions.
Goats_o_Mjolnir will give me an hand with grammars, typos and will try to make this thread a bit more interesting between the comic updates.

I hope you like it.


Updates twice a week or when the comic is ready.

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Old 04-05-2008, 06:53 AM   Top  -  End  -  #2
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Well, I must say, the art looks really well done.

I must add that I hope the rest of the comic will be more entertaining then the explanitory comic. I got really bored and couldn't finish it.

Other then that, looks pretty good. I'll be keeping an eye on this.
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Looking forward to it.
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Old 04-05-2008, 07:20 AM   Top  -  End  -  #4
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WOW! Artsy!
Another triple A OotS style comic imho.
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Wow. Just wow. Artwork and jokes, and good prologue, and 0 % 4th wall breaking.

Keep this up and I will still be here to comment
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Old 04-05-2008, 08:51 AM   Top  -  End  -  #6
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Welcome Gentleman, I'll be posting random updates and fluff in between updates. Me and Caracol plan on being dedicated to this project. So enjoy guys.
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Old 04-05-2008, 08:59 AM   Top  -  End  -  #7
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Very good art.

I'm looking forward for the next issue.
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The artwork is incredible! The grammar leaves something to be desired however (like i'm one to talk )

i'll be reading!
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So what genre would this be then? Fantasy? D&D?
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So what genre would this be then? Fantasy? D&D?
Probably generic fantasy.
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Why is it always a Tiefling...?
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Old 04-05-2008, 10:01 AM   Top  -  End  -  #12
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Thanks a bunch for your comments!!!

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Probably generic fantasy.
Actually, it will be pure and simple DnD...
Informations about the setting will be posted as the comic goes on, along with the cast members.
I know that my grammar sucks (not a native speaker), but Goats will try to correct me every time it's needed.
Bayar, sorry about that, but the 4th wall will be broken, like, a LOT of times. Because I have fun doing it, and I would like to have fun in making this story.
I hope that this wouldn't get us to lose a potential reader...

New strip coming sunday morning!!!
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Old 04-05-2008, 10:07 AM   Top  -  End  -  #13
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@Nameless: Well, Tieflings have a strong planar connection, they're evil so they have motivation, they're humanoid so they can use all the same stuff most PCs can. In this instance they're a fairly good option for a villain.

@Caracol: Alright, I'll put it in the right section of the index then.

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Looks cool.. I wonder how its going to pan out
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Old 04-06-2008, 06:09 AM   Top  -  End  -  #15
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Strip 2 is now on! With 30% of 4th wall breaking (sorry bayar).

2# - Was that a Bluff Check?
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I hope that you guys enjoy this...

The script and the drawings are well proceeding right now. I'm glad I've done some strip in advance, to be sure to make two updates a week at least (I'm currently working on strip 6).
But to be sure that you don't get bored between the updates, me and Goats will post some fluff about the comic setting next week, just to give you more stuff to read.
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The left eye of the most above thief is at an odd angle. Just noticing.
Good comic though.
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The left eye of the most above thief is at an odd angle. Just noticing.
Good comic though.
Actually, it's a scar... But the resizing of the page make it hard to make out, I guess...

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Nice, good art and some good detail, been a little bit too wordy so far though.
The thief's scar is pretty obvious on my screen so I wouldn't worry about that
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I recieved a pm asking about kittens. You wont get Kittens in this comic unless you earn them
thanks for reading and your comments, they continue to fuel our efforts.
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I recieved a pm asking about kittens. You wont get Kittens in this comic unless you earn them
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I like the way this is heading. I'll be sure to keep on reading this.
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Greetings playgrounders, Comic 3 is up!!!

3# - Running away is always the best tactic
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I foresee a Love-Hate relationship in the future party
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You foresee well, at least for the Hate part...

Cast section will be updated later. Meanwhile, here's the first of the banners (collect them all!!!)

I would be glad if this comic's fans (if any) could spread the word across the forum with this banner...
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Wow. Lemme add this up...

Good Art + Good Story + Interesting Characters + Funny As Heck = Awesome.

By the way, man, I know you say English isn't your native tongue, but you still do a pretty good job of using it properly.
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Wow. Lemme add this up...

Good Art + Good Story + Interesting Characters + Funny As Heck = Awesome.

By the way, man, I know you say English isn't your native tongue, but you still do a pretty good job of using it properly.
Many thanks! I will try to make the comic interesting to read the best I can.
The strips are not filled with typos and wrong grammars, but just because Goats edits them everytime I make one. Without him they would probably be a total mess.
We basically work like this: I make the strip, he corrects it adding more ideas and jokes.
I make the scripts, and I must say that's its funny to write something in a different lenguage, you have an hard time to express something and to convey some jokes, and meanwhile I manage to do some jokes and phrases in english spontaneously.

We are currently editing strip 6, and working on some fluff to post. Meanwhile, check out the Cast section, it's updated!
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This looks pretty cool. Imma keep watch for the fourth one.
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I'm surprised I haven't comented on this yet.
Yeah, good comic.
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Heres some fluff to hold you over

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Yea and verily, 'twas brillig and in slithy toves... or something.

Awesome fluff.
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