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04-03-2008, 09:18 PM
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Dwarf in the Playground
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Eating Grass
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#1 when you're down and out
#2 cannonball!
#3 Sorcery!
#4
not-so-sneaky attack
#5 dragonbreath
#6 pearls before swine
#7 copyright infringement?
i know it's no OOTS, but this is my first try at a webcomic
criticism is welcome!
Many thanks to Rich Burlew for obvious reasons, Bloodyredcommie, for the help with inkscape, and Sneak for getting me noticed!
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04-03-2008, 09:19 PM
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Eating Grass
I like the last panel.
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Bravo Szilard. Bravo!
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04-03-2008, 09:20 PM
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Ettin in the Playground
Re: Eating Grass
I see you took my advice. :P
Anyway, bravo.
04-03-2008, 09:22 PM
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Dwarf in the Playground
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i did indeed, thnx sneak! and you too Szilard!
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04-03-2008, 10:21 PM
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Barbarian in the Playground
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This is great, the last panel made me laugh. So, if you continue to make these, I will read them.
Just thought you should know.
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04-03-2008, 10:53 PM
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Barbarian in the Playground
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Re: Eating Grass
With my great mental powers, I see that this comic has great potential.
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04-04-2008, 12:43 AM
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Re: Eating Grass
Mmm, good. Easy to follow, nice jokes and the art is okay.
(I see some small letters where capital letters should be - call me a nitpick, but it makes the comic look like it's made in a rush)
04-04-2008, 12:45 AM
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Re: Eating Grass
As long as you dont blatantly break th 4th wall, I will be watching this.
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04-04-2008, 10:59 PM
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kool, i'm glad there are people who actually find this amusing (and as i said, criticism is always welcome, even the nitpicky kind)
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04-04-2008, 11:04 PM
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Re: Eating Grass
i'm not sure how often i can get them up though, summer is still 2 months away, and i currently have 3 AP classes in school, so i don't have a ton of free time, but i'll do the best i can
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04-05-2008, 02:02 AM
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Re: Eating Grass
If this first strip is any indication, I see great things from this comic. Keep up the good work
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04-05-2008, 07:50 PM
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Re: Eating Grass
The last panel made me lol. This is pretty good. I'm looking forward to the new ones.
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04-05-2008, 09:15 PM
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Re: Eating Grass
Lawl. Those poor fighters.
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04-06-2008, 09:01 PM
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#1
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woohoo! number two! not as funny, but much more plot relevant! yay!
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04-07-2008, 05:33 AM
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Ewww...the drool in his mouth splashed...
04-07-2008, 07:23 AM
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Re: Eating Grass
Quite funny, actually. The colors are a bit garish, and you might want to run it through a spellchecker, but the pacing is good, and the characters have an original feel to them.
Oh, and I suggest you edit your first post to show all comics you've done so far, not just the first one. That way, people don't have to dig through the discussion thread to read the story.
EDIT: One more thing, the relative size between the (gnome wizard?) and the (human rogue?) seems to vary from panel to panel. I presume that's not intentional.
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04-07-2008, 09:26 AM
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Bugbear in the Playground
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Re: Eating Grass
The mysterious green glowing guy looks kinda like Nameless.
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04-07-2008, 09:48 AM
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Re: Eating Grass
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The mysterious green glowing guy looks kinda like Nameless.
Heh. So it does.
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04-07-2008, 11:35 AM
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Barbarian in the Playground
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hey i like this it funny so far and pirates i have a feeling this comic is going to be really good
04-07-2008, 03:54 PM
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Dwarf in the Playground
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Re: Eating Grass
lol, i guess it does, but i assure you it is not. I appreciate u guys actually reading this, i figured it would never get off the ground.
More issues to come!
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04-07-2008, 07:25 PM
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Ooh, a mysterious robed magic-user. I am intrigued.
04-07-2008, 07:53 PM
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Re: Eating Grass
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EDIT: One more thing, the relative size between the (gnome wizard?) and the (human rogue?) seems to vary from panel to panel. I presume that's not intentional.
Then again, if it WAS intentional (Or he just rolled with it now that it's pointed out...) that would probably be pretty cool.
04-07-2008, 08:40 PM
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Then again, if it WAS intentional (Or he just rolled with it now that it's pointed out...) that would probably be pretty cool.
maybe it was, maybe it wasn't... it's a MYSTERY!!!!
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04-09-2008, 06:05 PM
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Re: Eating Grass
UPDATE!!! #3 is golden brown, fresh out of the oven!
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04-09-2008, 06:09 PM
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Bugbear in the Playground
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Re: Eating Grass
Nice fireball from the foot.
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04-09-2008, 06:29 PM
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: Eating Grass
Huh.
Make the text bigger - it's barely legible as is, and if you make it any smaller, as you did for Reduce Person - or even just saying something less important - it flat out can't be read.
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04-09-2008, 06:46 PM
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Pixie in the Playground
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Re: Eating Grass
At first I thought he said "raped without mercy". I'm glad he didn't... Raping stalks of wheat?
04-09-2008, 06:47 PM
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Re: Eating Grass
I use 12 Font and export 90 DPI. It looks about right. So, if you use 90 DPI, use 12 font. Otherwise, make sure that the font size times the resolution is 1080.
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04-09-2008, 06:54 PM
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By the way, 5 bonus points for Monty Python reference.
04-09-2008, 06:55 PM
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Re: Eating Grass
Where was that?
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