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09-21-2008, 12:25 PM
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The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Welcome to 'The Fire Within'.
This backstory is an OotS Style webcomic and a spin-off of ABR, telling everyone what happened from the birth of Chriky, right up until FireDrake and Chriky had entered the ABR:FFF plot. As such it will be written and drawn by FireDrake and Chriky (brothers in real-life, for anyone who doesn't know) and should update once a fortnight. You might even get more comics, when we have less homework. Then again, when Firedrake is making the comic it could potentially take longer than that, he's a bit of a perfectionist, and he's on his GCSE year.
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Comic 9:
Comic 10
Comic 11
Comic 12
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The ABR Wiki
The Current ABR Thread
And Mechafoxes FFF Plot Compilations:
1, 2, 3, 4.
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09-21-2008, 12:29 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Also, anything that happens in this has canonicity over our comics in ABR. (ie.
this )
09-21-2008, 02:41 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
You know, it's funny, but this title sounds quite a bit like the title of a well-known novel.
Coincidence? I think not.
09-21-2008, 02:45 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
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You know, it's funny, but this title sounds quite a bit like the title of a well-known novel.
Coincidence? I think not.
I actually came up with the title and had never heard of the book
however firedrake has read the whole series and did tell me before we used it.
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09-21-2008, 02:51 PM
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Ogre in the Playground
Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
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The Gremlin
You know, it's funny, but this title sounds quite a bit like the title of a well-known novel.
Coincidence? I think not.
Never heard of any book going by that title.
And it's a good title for a comic about 2.. dragon.. people.. things.. mutants. Dragons? Fire within? My pun senses are tingling.. that may just be the aspirin though.
I have relatively high hopes for this backstory, so I hope you guys wont start slacking and stop making comics like every other 3 out of 4 backstorys.
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09-21-2008, 02:51 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
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You know, it's funny, but this title sounds quite a bit like the title of a well-known novel.
Coincidence? I think not.
I was thinking of calling it The Fire Internal, as a sort of play on the titles of two of the series.
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Tiffanie Lirle
I have relatively high hopes for this backstory, so I hope you guys wont start slacking and stop making comics like every other 3 out of 4 backstorys.
We should be able to manage our once a week update. It gives me the weekend to do the cartloads of homework I've been getting recently, as well as the comic. Most of our templates and story is already prepared, so we probably won't end up slacking.
EDIT: I'll add the comic at about 7am (GMT) Tommorrow (22-9-08)
Last edited by FireDrake : 09-21-2008 at 03:15 PM .
09-22-2008, 01:03 AM
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Comic #1:
Hope you like it.
09-22-2008, 04:42 AM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
I've never seen that place, this should be interesting
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09-28-2008, 05:06 AM
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look comic 2 say something about it
Also i made a new banner
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09-28-2008, 09:54 AM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
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look comic 2 say something about it
Also i made a new banner
Good work, guys.
09-28-2008, 02:41 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
I just wanna make it clear that, Comic#2 is our post for this week. Then again, Chriky is making the next comic, so it won't take as long probly.
09-28-2008, 03:20 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Fairly good quality, engaging storyline, looks to be good
09-30-2008, 01:41 PM
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09-30-2008, 04:50 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Whole line of Firedrakes. Clearly the Y chromosome of this family doesn't include naming creativity.
10-02-2008, 12:53 PM
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10-02-2008, 01:43 PM
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Wow, a Lyinginbedmon doll
. Or is it an action figure ?
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10-02-2008, 01:43 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Hehe, doll-shaped cameos
Let's see, Lying, The Gremlin, Threeshades, Nameless, Firedrake, who's the grey-skinned fellow in the theatre?
10-02-2008, 01:50 PM
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Ogre in the Playground
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Looks like a certain moonelf. ;)
10-02-2008, 01:56 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
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Hehe, doll-shaped cameos
Let's see, Lying, The Gremlin, Threeshades, Nameless, Firedrake, who's the grey-skinned fellow in the theatre?
Looks like Sildyu (sp) to me.
10-02-2008, 01:59 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Your all right except it's not firedrake it's icendulus
(also they're meant to be action figures)
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10-02-2008, 02:10 PM
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Ettin in the Playground
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All new Lyinginbedmon figure! With telekinetic grip action!
Includes 5 voice messages!
"I'm taking you off my Boccobsmas list!"
"Did I mention I can desolate a 400 mile wide area in an instant?"
"Oh gods, I can see..."
"The Exersus Resistance will tear this Empire apart. Brick. By. Brick."
"I hate Teleport"
10-02-2008, 02:47 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Cool I guess my action figure has transforming action. Can assume any of the three Shades.
Awesome.
10-03-2008, 09:20 AM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Great comic, you two.
Pretty much, any comic that I feature in is 'cool'.
10-12-2008, 05:52 AM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
Oops, we went off the bottom of the page.
New Comic:
Technically this is our comic for the 21st October. We seem to be getting ahead of ourselves.
10-12-2008, 06:45 AM
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Ettin in the Playground
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Somebody's gonna need marriage counselling...
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10-12-2008, 09:10 AM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
shouldn't comic 4 and 5 be in the first post too?
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10-12-2008, 09:43 AM
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shouldn't comic 4 and 5 be in the first post too?
Fix'd
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10-12-2008, 11:07 AM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
This comic explains a lot.
10-12-2008, 04:23 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
I love this comic, great OotS-art!
I'll have to get started on my backstory comic at some point...hmm...
10-12-2008, 04:38 PM
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Re: The Fire Within (another ABR backstory)
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I love this comic, great OotS-art!
I'll have to get started on my backstory comic at some point...hmm...
I don't think you have to make a backstory.
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