Looks like we have a plot, and not just random funniness.
I don't exactly get the last bit of that comic, though.
Basically, Divvur is messing with the green dude's head by suggesting that people could come in the middle of the night and murder him. He knows he is being messed with, which is why he says these next few days are going to suck (Divvur being around constantly messing with him).
Of course, whether there is actually any truth in what Divvur says remains to be seen.
Sorry this one was a bit late guys. I just have not been able to get on the computer I do it on as much (This tends to happen during the weekends especially). Hopefully I should be able to get back into the swing of it though. In any case, here is #008!
It did not, I swear! It was just unwell while I had to leave quickly for urgent business in...erm...Peru! Yeah. Top secret government stuff. Fortunately I am "back" now, so I can give it its medicine and hopefully will make and get the next comic up in the next thirteen or so hours.
But yeah, I do not want it to die either. I will do my best to get it back up and running.
I find the baloon tails to be too long, especially in the latest comic (#9).
I'm guessing you don't want to hude the art you've worked one, or something, but I find it harder to read because of that.
Just my two cents.
Hmm, you raise a good point. Generally I try to avoid it, but often when there is a lot of text (Especially a conversation like this where it all needs to be in the right order) it is unavoidable unless I have everyone swap places each panel, which just looks weird. I have no problem with putting them over stuff like furniture, but over people is obviously a problem, as it can also destroy their expressions, and in turn makes it very hard to connect other speech bubbles to them. And in my experience it just looks messy. I think you're right though, especially with the latest one, that it could have been done a bit better. Arranging and using speech bubbles is a fine art. >.>
But thanks for the constructive criticism, I will definitely try and keep that more in mind in future.
Also, as you can all tell the new comic is not up. This is because I am lazy I have been busy. Yeah. Busy. With...stuff. Mmm. In any case, I will try and get it up as soon as I can be bothered.
1: I could not get the Q in the title to stop showing up like that when I exported it to an image. It showed up fine in Inkscape, but whenever I tried exporting it, it came out like that for some reason. No idea why.
2: This is the first time all four main characters are in the same panel (Five if we include Divvur, who has had more appearances than, say, Jade >_>).
3: Divvur originally had a fair bit more to say in panel six. It did not fit though, so I had to change it. I like it better this way anyway though, ended up snappier, as it was mostly useless text anyway.
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Honestly though, I am REALLY sorry for the delay. I always swore to myself I would not become one of those people who takes eons to update - or indeed even show that he is alive - especially given these are not that hard to make, and now look at me! I could probably give a list of reasons or mitigating circumstances, but I am like, too kool for that. So yeah, sorry.
But hey, it is here now! When I actually sat down and did this it turned out to be rather frustrating to make due to my arch-nemesis Masking, but I got it done in the end. So without further ado, here is #011!
Yeah, what's up with that? Does no one use the freezer? How do they eat?
I do not know about you, but I do not actually use my freezer ALL that often, and I could certainly imagine living without it (I would not especially WANT to, but I could). Besides, using the freezer would be precious extra effort, and the cast of Dysfunctional are as lazy as they come.
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This was a good one, and I hope all their intelligence scores aren't relative to the Half-Orc's because If in that world a Half-orc is worldly and full of tact, then everyone else would be raving animals.
(I know that's not the case, but It went through my head as I was writing the post, so now it's been posted)