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Old 11-03-2008, 06:50 PM   Top  -  End  -  #1
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Popopo

The Popopo are a curious race of small humanoids. Rarely reaching over a meter in height, the appear to be primarily a giant ball with hands and feet. They are generally a very peaceable race, and are very welcoming and trusting of others. Their unusual physiology makes them extremely resilient and as such they tend to turn the other cheek most of the time. They are usually white, yellow, or pink in color, though darker colorings, such as blue or purple have been known to show up.

When they are forced into action they can be surprisingly dangerous foes. Their bodies can contain enormous volume, leading some to believe they are little more than walking stomachs. They use this to their advantage in combat, swallowing their opponents and holding them. These swallowed enemies are sometimes used as weapons, spit back out at other fighters. But by far their most unusual quality is their ability to absorb some of the power of their swallowed foe, gaining special attacks and qualities.

A Popopo will commonly be a Paladin or Warlord, but Clerics are fairly common as well.

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That's a large number of feats just to make a Kirby, though...
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Old 11-03-2008, 07:04 PM   Top  -  End  -  #3
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I think inhale should be changed to one creature one size category or less then you. There is a few times when Kirby is bigger, you get to use it against larger enemies.
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Old 11-03-2008, 07:12 PM   Top  -  End  -  #4
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That's a large number of feats just to make a Kirby, though...
Indeed!

And the way I figure it, Kirby is a pretty high level Popopo, who has devoted most of his feats to racial feats. Of course, I'm sure there are other ways of representing Kirby's ability theft.

Dublock: I was thinking about making Inhale based on the Popopo's size, it shouldn't be a difficult fix.
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...Oh dear.

This is equally broken and ridiculously awesome.

Scratch broken. But still, awesome.

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How about this?

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"Kirby steals the abilities of any foe he has swallowed"
At-Will Standard Action
Requirement: You must have an enemy in your stomach by using the Inhale Power to use this ability.
Effect: You gain the subtype(s) of the creature, except swarm or mount. You can also make use of the creature's Basic Attack. You cannot use Inhale while manifesting a creature in this fashion. You can dismiss this effect as a minor action.

And then give them a slew of racial feats that make this better.

I.e., you gain one of the target's movement modes
You gain a resistance equal to the target's highest resistance.
You can make use of any of the creature's powers, but you calculate your own attack bonus and can still only use them with the same frequency as the original user.
The way you calculate Attack: Highest Modifier + 1/2 Level
You gain a +X proficiency bonus to attacks you have stolen from enemies.
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I was thinking about something like that, but I have a couple concerns about it. One, it'll involve a lot more book keeping, and typically the basic attacks of monsters are the least defining or recognizable. And I'd have to modify Inhale a bit to use the aquired abilities, since I currently have it set up as a sustain standard.

I'll play with the idea a bit, and see what I come up with.
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I was thinking about something like that, but I have a couple concerns about it. One, it'll involve a lot more book keeping, and typically the basic attacks of monsters are the least defining or recognizable. And I'd have to modify Inhale a bit to use the aquired abilities, since I currently have it set up as a sustain standard.

I'll play with the idea a bit, and see what I come up with.
The thing is, he can't keep guys in his mouth if he steals their power. So he takes the power, then spits them out .
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The thing is, as written, if you don't sustain Inhale at the beginning of your turn you spit the creature out, losing the ability to use it's attacks. So I'd have to change it a bit.

...wait, the way you've written it, the popopo would retain these effect indefinitely. Is that roughly what you were aiming for?

Hmm...I might be able to do something with this....
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The thing is, as written, if you don't sustain Inhale at the beginning of your turn you spit the creature out, losing the ability to use it's attacks. So I'd have to change it a bit.

...wait, the way you've written it, the popopo would retain these effect indefinitely. Is that roughly what you were aiming for?

Hmm...I might be able to do something with this....
Yeah. Well, Kirby can, so why not?

Also, maybe if he takes more than his healing surge value in damage from one attack, he loses any powers he has, or if he is bloodied.
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This is pretty cool. I think maybe you should add more maic items, maybe like a warpstar type thing or a star wand, but besides that, nice job.
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How about this?

Power Sap
"Kirby steals the abilities of any foe he has swallowed"
At-Will Standard Action
Requirement: You must have an enemy in your stomach by using the Inhale Power to use this ability.
Effect: You gain the subtype(s) of the creature, except swarm or mount. You can also make use of the creature's Basic Attack. You cannot use Inhale while manifesting a creature in this fashion. You can dismiss this effect as a minor action.

And then give them a slew of racial feats that make this better.

I.e., you gain one of the target's movement modes
You gain a resistance equal to the target's highest resistance.
You can make use of any of the creature's powers, but you calculate your own attack bonus and can still only use them with the same frequency as the original user.
The way you calculate Attack: Highest Modifier + 1/2 Level
You gain a +X proficiency bonus to attacks you have stolen from enemies.
Kirby's copy ability could be as simple as "Gains one of the inhaled target's at-will powers in place of inhale until the end of the encounter/takes x damage"
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Hmm...I might be able to do something with this....
And have you, perchance, done something with it? Because it was a pretty cool idea.
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Sorry I haven't updated these guys, I've been crazy busy! Anyway, here's some new stuff, and a big change to the ability theft.

Hopefully I'll be able to find some time to do up the mounts!
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I'd leave the previous power-feats available. Else Morphic Quality seems kinda useless...
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Havent checked this out in awhile, but it looks very good now. I'm itching to find an excuse to try it our .
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Heads up! I slightly altered these guys and am using them in Lords of Creation: Chains of the Aeon and calling them munoks. Way to make something totally awesome! Thanks!
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