Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory) - Page 2

Fay Graydon · 11-30-2008, 01:09 PM

Sorry its so late.... and sorry I only made one...
but here we are:

Spoiler

memnarch · 11-30-2008, 01:12 PM

Heh.

Is that an empty bed?

Fay Graydon · 11-30-2008, 01:14 PM

....yes

Tiffanie Lirle · 12-01-2008, 04:14 PM

If I may offer a little criticism?

In the last panel, you could have moved their arms around or make them run around in panic or something.. It's just seems so awkward to see them screaming while standing completely still.

But for what it's worth, I knew that was a bed. <.<

Green-Shirt Q · 12-01-2008, 05:24 PM

I thought the guy with the white eyes was blind? How does he know the nurse was cute?

Bet you didn't think anybody'd catch that, did you?!

Szilard · 12-01-2008, 06:45 PM

At 17 or 19 he got some weird magical eye things.

Green-Shirt Q · 12-01-2008, 08:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Szilard

At 17 or 19 he got some weird magical eye things.

*reads archive again*

Whoops. I missed that.

Vulion · 12-01-2008, 09:08 PM

I guess this is the place for fanart.

Fayt:

Spoiler

Elrond · 12-02-2008, 12:27 AM

OOOOO!!!! could i have a cameo could i could i?

ill give you a cookie
Ill PM you the info

By the way Vulion thats scethch is really good

Fay Graydon · 12-02-2008, 11:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vulion

I guess this is the place for fanart.

Fayte:

Spoiler

*Squeals* ^-^
Is sooooo good!

and yes Fayte did get optical implants (sci-fi... gotta love it

)

Elrond · 12-07-2008, 03:26 AM

Waits for cameo

Fay Graydon · 12-07-2008, 07:51 AM

new comic:

Spoiler

Szilard · 12-07-2008, 11:23 AM

Ouch.

Lyinginbedmon · 12-07-2008, 11:39 AM

Not the cute nurse!

Mad Mask · 12-07-2008, 11:45 AM

Poor girl...

Reinholdt · 12-07-2008, 12:14 PM

*sheds tears for the nurse*
Get that meanie who shot her!

memnarch · 12-07-2008, 12:34 PM

That's not good!

Bayar · 12-07-2008, 12:40 PM

Lol. *head 'splody*

Mad Mask · 12-07-2008, 12:56 PM

Fayt certainly loves gore; he's one of the few OotS artist to include so much in his comics.

Elrond · 12-08-2008, 03:50 AM

I agreed mask but why fayt why i loved that nurse she was so cute cant wait to find out who did it though

Fay Graydon · 12-08-2008, 03:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reinholdt

*sheds tears for the nurse*
Get that meanie who shot her!

*salutes* will do

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mad Mask

Fayt certainly loves gore; he's one of the few OotS artist to include so much in his comics.

why thank you

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elrond

I agreed mask but why fayt why i loved that nurse she was so cute cant wait to find out who did it though

why? cuz i can

EDIT:
I might start the next comic now *strokes goatee*

Elrond · 12-09-2008, 02:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fayt

why? cuz i can

Why but thats so mean and she was so cute

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fayt

EDIT:
I might start the next comic now *strokes goatee*

But this parts good very good

Fay Graydon · 12-10-2008, 06:25 AM

Well I hope you all enjoyed the Pilot episode....
now, Episode 2:

Spoiler

[hr]
EDIT:
well, I thought maybe it was time for a little contest

Basically your task is to do the following:
In every television show there is (usually) a start up sequence, I want you to either script one or make a comic with a theme song for Dawn of Yesterday

I will judge them along with 2 other people (If you wish to be a judge then ask me, but if not then two of my real life friends will get the role).

The rules:
1) don't post it in the thread as people can look at your attempt and steal ideas,
2) if you choose to do a comic then make sure it is either 6 panels or a multiple thereof.
3) No stealing of my work

It will mean automatic disqualification if you have obviously ripped off my artwork.
4) be creative, if you choose to make a baddy then i will attempt to include him/her in the comic at some point, but don't use this as a way to get yourself into my comic.
5) if you make up a song then please tell me the tune to which it goes, and make sure you include the song name and band in the PM if you use an existing song (I may not know the lyrics to everysong

)

thats all.
The closing date is January the 1st

Green-Shirt Q · 12-10-2008, 07:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fayt

<hr>
EDIT:
well, I thought maybe it was time for a little contest

Basically your task is to do the following:
In every television show there is (usually) a start up sequence, I want you to either script one or make a comic with a theme song for Dawn of Yesterday

I will judge them along with 2 other people (If you wish to be a judge then ask me, but if not then two of my real life friends will get the role).

The rules:
1) don't post it in the thread as people can look at your attempt and steal ideas,
2) if you choose to do a comic then make sure it is either 6 panels or a multiple thereof.
3) No stealing of my work

It will mean automatic disqualification if you have obviously ripped off my artwork.
4) be creative, if you choose to make a baddy then i will attempt to include him/her in the comic at some point, but don't use this as a way to get yourself into my comic.
5) if you make up a song then please tell me the tune to which it goes, and make sure you include the song name and band in the PM if you use an existing song (I may not know the lyrics to everysong

)

thats all.
The closing date is January the 1st

WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?!

Fay Graydon · 12-10-2008, 08:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by the_Q

WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?!

Because you comic isn't set out like a TV show

Bayar · 12-10-2008, 12:09 PM

So we cant use your characters ? Even if we draw them ourselves ?

Fay Graydon · 12-10-2008, 12:26 PM

You can use my characters.
just as long as you don't copy them straight out of a comic.
They need to be drawn by you.

Elrond · 12-12-2008, 03:07 AM

I dont get it

Tiffanie Lirle · 12-12-2008, 07:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elrond

I dont get it

He's basically saying we can use his characters, as long as we don't directly cut them out of his comics and paste them into our thing.

If you drew your own version of them, then everything's ok.

I would love to try my hand at this. But sadly I've got 2 comics to finish, a script to write, and then I've got to work on a 3rd comic for Abr.

I sometimes feel that I need a easier hobby..

Fay Graydon · 12-12-2008, 07:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tiffanie Lirle

He's basically saying we can use his characters, as long as we don't directly cut them out of his comics and paste them into our thing.

If you drew your own version of them, then everything's ok.

exactly

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tiffanie Lirle

I would love to try my hand at this. But sadly I've got 2 comics to finish, a script to write, and then I've got to work on a 3rd comic for Abr.

I sometimes feel that I need a easier hobby..

Well you still have plenty of time

and if I only get like 1 or 2 entries then i'll probabbly extend it by a week or two

(but I'd rather not)