Quote Originally Posted by Raz_Fox View Post
So I... uh... I wrote a thing. Because I had to. It's probably honestly not the best thing ever. It rambles when it needs to be short, and is terse where it needs to be long. But it's a pony fic.

I know you don't usually associate me with romance, but I think the chemistry between the two leads here is great. So, without further ado, the proof that I have become the kind of person who writes pony fanfiction:

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Since this is quite literally the steaming-hot-fresh-off-the-keyboard first draft, feel free to tell me how awful it is.
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Well that's... intriguing. Surreal, but intriguing. It took me a little while to figure out what was going on, but once I did I found myself fascinated. Very head spinny stuff. Is this the consequence fictional characters suffer as a result of an overabundance of fiction written about them?

I'm actually very hesitant to offer any advice about fixing things up or changing much of anything. What I can tell you is that it works as it is, and I fear it may never work again. It's broken where it needs to be. I think that's the best way of putting it. I don't know if that's very helpful, but it's what I've got at the moment. Thanks for sharing your work with us.