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2011-04-13, 12:27 AM (ISO 8601)
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#133
Re: My Little Pony V: Art of the Thread
In Sunny Skies All Day, could you change alicorn to pegacorn to honour the fact that is what ponies like Celestia and Luna would be called by Jagex?
Now what I think absolutely has to change is the one that in the second time that the line "that that" was used needs to be changed into a than to make that sentence a proper sentence. I wasn't worried about the first "that that" in the story as it natural as if Princess Celestia was saying that line.