1. 2011-05-17, 07:47 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #1131
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    Default Re: My Little Pony VII: The Grand Galloping Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by DeadManSleeping View Post
    I will take this opportunity to ask for reviews one last time. I really need them! Please, please, please give me feedback. The longer I go without it, the worse the fic will get. Do you want to be responsible for bad fanfiction? No? Good. Help me!
    Time for the review of Part 2. To be honest, I don't have much to say, since it looks like you really hit your stride in this part. The scenes transition pretty well and the character interaction is fun. The whole thing also flows better than the first part in terms of sentence choice and style.

    Thumbs up!

    EDIT: I do have to admit that I'm not quite sure what we're building to just yet, but I think you mentioned that you envisioned it being a long series so that may be why.
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    DD, your unicorn is stronger, prettier, and higher-ranking than mine, and her secret lab has a better name than mine. THERE SHALL BE NO QUARTER.
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