General Exalted Discussion VI: Ascendancy Mantle of the Playground

[TheCountAlucard]

1) Might I recommend going over it again and fixing the errors? For instance, it's supposed to be "botches," not "Blotches," and "despair" instead of "dispair."

2) You might want to use slightly-clearer language on some of the parts, like in Grit Your Teeth.

3) For a once per story effect, removing one Limit is kinda weaksauce. After all, if an Abyssal's trying to redeem himself, he may well accrue a hundred points of Resonance in a story. Maybe bump it up to (Essence) Resonance/Limit?

4) Last but not least, it doesn't actually "slap the emo" out of someone. Yes, it removes negative natural/unnatural mental influences (which is, again, ill-defined), and makes it hard for others to instill them in the subject, but the subject himself is free to build whatever sort of feelings he wants afterward.