Quote Originally Posted by big teej View Post
I really liked it, but I must confess...

my thoughts to the opening line or two were

"ya know, this is awfully similar to that hangover scene I wrote a few pages back"


which unfortunately gave the story a slight tone of humor to me until I found out the poor girl had been shot full of arrows.
Which I find rather amusing, so don't worry about it

Quote Originally Posted by big teej View Post
I found it very well written.... and I don't have a clue who it is.
Oh good. And let me ask - the descriptions - mostly of pain, were they okay? realistic? it's hard to write that sort of pain when you've never experienced it before. I've recently been reading my Rob Thurman books and she is very good at describing nasty stuff like being shot full of arrows (actually it was only one, very well placed arrow) so I've been sort of copying her style a bit, not sure if it worked.

And who it is will become clearer later, I have others planned for this - sort of a mini-series.