Request a Homebrew

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Your alternative seems fine. Also, don't forget that:
1: It can cast somatic-component spells. Not Material-component ones, though.
2: It can still have a psionic class. That gives it plenty to do in combat.
3: Under "Cloudminds as Characters", you have an unnecessary apostrophe, and your [size] tag is broken

Switched Dominate with Override Other.
1: alright.
2: Right.
3: fixed.

Also, lowered LA by 1. Since it can make it's enemies attack each other, almost every round if it wishes...