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2011-10-25, 09:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Because SCIENCE!! (3.5 Monster)
Oooh, boy. Wow. That's... just... wrong...
Damn.
Okay, uh, well, yeah... Sheesh...
Anyway, uh, Disturbing Presence should have a range. It should be "Plot Hooks" instead of "Plot Hoks". And, IMO, Acidic Waste (which is really gross, eww) should offer a Reflex save to avoid the cone instead of making it a ranged touch attack, as that does not really jive well with an area effect. Good job on this one; it's very flavorful, it's rather balanced, & it is well-designed.
Lastly, what is wrong with you?!?