Almost perfect, Ceika. (And, btw, SO excited you drew an avvy for me.) Pose isn't super important, but I forgot to describe her sword.
She basically works with Cthulu-esque monsters, thinking them gods. And her sword is a Starshadow blade, whose description reads, "A long sword formed of ghostly light and darkness. At times it glimmers with a baleful paleness, and at others, it appears surrounded by slithering tendrils of shadow, visible only from the corner of the eye. The longsword of shifting light and shadow appears as if someone made it by folding molten dreams and nightmares in the forge of a star."
So...scary night/star-looking sword? When she gets to a high enough level, tiny ghostly planets revolve around the blade, and drops of a foe's blood turn into tiny stars in her orrery (see, I even learned a new word).
Whatever you can make work, I will love it. As we love you.
EDIT: ALSO, I PREFER THE PANTS ONE. THANK YOU.