1. 2012-03-15, 04:35 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #23
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    Default Re: Kitsune (4e Race) - (Update: Ver 3.1 - 3/7/12) PEACH: Looking for feedback, pleas

    That looks a lot better. I'm sure I could pick out flaws if I really went through it, but I just wanted to open the discussion with that phrase. Lots and lots of improvements, and they're all in the right direction. It looks actually playable now.

    The first and only thing that jumps out to me as needing changing is the polymorph. I'd remove the bonus granted to not being able to see through it - because honestly, a Kitsune probably shouldn't be infinitely better than a changeling...and also allow you to turn into an actual multi-tailed fox woodland critter, hiding your gear and possessions appropriately while in that form. It just seems thematic.
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