Re: Dominic Deegan: Oracle for Hire, Mk. XLIV: Stunt Bro and Hella Jayden
Originally Posted by Veridis Quo
Here's My first attempt at altering the strip from yesterday. Sorry I cut out the first half, I honestly didn't know what to do with them.
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Instead of just having Rilian just push the plot forward, let's give some insight into his head as well. A little development couldn't hurt, and we can add some tension leading up to today's "cliffhanger".
That was a really good re-work. I applaud your ability to make something interesting out of crap.
Don't worry about cutting parts of this comic, it's badly in need of some pruning.
If Ignorance is bliss, I'll take suffering any day.
-Annonymous