Quote Originally Posted by Veridis Quo View Post
Here's My first attempt at altering the strip from yesterday. Sorry I cut out the first half, I honestly didn't know what to do with them.

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Instead of just having Rilian just push the plot forward, let's give some insight into his head as well. A little development couldn't hurt, and we can add some tension leading up to today's "cliffhanger".
That was a really good re-work. I applaud your ability to make something interesting out of crap.

Don't worry about cutting parts of this comic, it's badly in need of some pruning.