Quote Originally Posted by Dispozition View Post
I'd redraw the lamp...And redo all the lineart. A) You want it consistent, B) you want varying line thickness in the lamp post and whatnot, don't use shapes unless as a base, C) Your lines have basically no thickness variation and are far too light (in my opinion at least.
The lamp will be redone later. That's more of a placeholder so I can get the general size/position right.

I'll see about thickening up some of those lines too. I'm probably not going to make them as thick as on the show, but I agree that they could use some work to make them stand out a bit.

Quote Originally Posted by Dispozition View Post
The background is really nice though, quite in line with the style of the show, so good work on that one.
Thanks!