Trying desperately to get caught up with stories:

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Wars and Weddings (Part 3)
Mrs. Bloodplunder
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I feel that this is a little short. It's well-written, though. I'm eager to see more from you.

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Post-Death MagJournal Entry 9 – Wherein Entirely Predictable Plot Twists Happen

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Much as I like this story, I feel that it's beginning to drag just a little. Probably just me, though.

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Rise of the Prophet, Part 4
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There's not much I can say that hasn't already been said. This was great, I can hardly wait for the final part.

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The Story of Kirlia: Prelude
Character: Kirlia
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I don't like Dragonball, so that probably colored my thoughts on this story a little. I do think it's well-written, and the dialogue of the next part is good; it's just not for me.

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New Location Discovered: Laneside Bowling

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I'm probably not unbiased with this story either; Fallout's one of my favorite game series. That said, I feel that this managed to elicit the feel and atmosphere of a Fallout game rather well. It's pretty good.