@Lady Moreta
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Laziness requires I not use the quotes. Mwahahaha.
RE: Loot
Well...we don't find much money, and wouldn't have reason to take it if we did. We do find stuff, but there's no shops...anywhere. So, Kalach just happens to have some leftovers...
RE: Kol keeping the book
It gets better.
RE: Style Change
Just what I was going for. Glad it's working.
@Dr. Bwaa
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Laziness requires I not use the quotes. Mwahahaha.
RE: Foreshadowing
Meh. That's what practice is for.
RE: Length
Yes sir!
@PaperMustache
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While I am to lazy and busy to give in-depth commentary right now, I will say that your works are very well done.
EDIT: @SleepyShadow
You *would* turn out to be posting at the same time, eh? I've got a snippet coming, and will comment on yours when I post it.