I am so bad atpledgecrafting I think any advice would actually be detrimental. My attempts so far have led to being attacked with a knife, being abandoned in the hedge after having a favor extorted out of me, and I'm currently recovering from being tossed into a mosh pit of zombies by a Minotaur after trying to help him up.
Meanwhile my motley mate tricked said Minotaur into a pledge that entirely skewed a fight in her favor. It's insane.
If you mean the prose, I skimmed it because I was busy. I could look again? And your inbox is full