1. 2013-01-20, 05:01 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #11
    Gamerlord
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    Default Re: My Little Pony LX: 60 Ponythreads? That's an Academy record!

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    Prereaders Wanted
    A short little bit of dark comedy I wrote. Totally random and not to be taken too seriously, but I'd love some feedback before I submit it to the public.

    Please let me know if you think it needs the Gore tag. It is slightly questionable in that department, but nothing too bad, I hope.

    [Comedy][Dark] Everyone knows that dragons eat ponies. Now Spike knows it too, and he's about to get very hungry. Maybe even hungry enough to eat Snails.

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    Haven't finished it yet, but one thing:
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    Rarity would have none of such creepy crawl in her boutique. It was perfect.
    I presume you meant "creepy crawlers" or something like that?
    Last edited by Gamerlord; 2013-01-20 at 05:01 PM.
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