Something interesting about Freeform RP is that people often have the exact same idea, completely independently from each other.

The only thing wrong about Tatsuya that I can see is that "it's" is used when "its" is meant.
That, and the lack of a Zanpakuto, which I assume means you haven't had time to put it in yet and are in the process of fixing out the little details. That's what it always means when I do that.

Quote Originally Posted by Demidos View Post
Great! Should I go ahead and introduce her then?
Go ahead. Just make sure your post ends in her arriving at the "Primera Espada's Domain"