@PaperMustache
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Thanks for the help. I made all the appropriate changes, and I edited some sections to make it sound a little better. Feel free to re-re-read it and tell me what you think.

Also, I see the scratched out section. Eh, I must have copied and pasted instead of cut and pasted. I meant to just move it.


@Arkhosia
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You asked if your character could/should become a paladin. I don't think, so. Paladins are very lawful and you describe your character chaotic to say the least. Also, paladins are very religious and live by a strict doctrine. In 3.5 there are variants to allow for chaotic paladins. I recommend you look up Unearthed Arcana and check out the Paladin of Freedom. It won't be a perfect fit, but it is the closest for your character.


Well, off to work on Chapter 2!