The original has a better rhythm, which is much preferable to a painful part rhyme. :pOriginally Posted by Icewraith
Not sure which version I like better, the original has a better reference to the original material but the altered fourth line is a better reference to the current situation.
Edit: Also it's a slight off-rhyme.
I'm glad you like it.
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2013-08-01, 06:27 PM (ISO 8601)Bugbear in the Playground
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Re: D&D 5th Edition XII: Peasant Militias Can Defeat Smartphones?
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"Let us tell the story of a certain man. The tale of a man who, more than anyone else, believed in his ideals, and by them was driven into despair."
