Quote Originally Posted by Hartwig View Post
Then an adaptations paragraph so DMs don't disallow it because they think it sounds corny?

Personally, I love most of the flavor and don't see why it needs feminine connotation.
Because it's HOMEBREW and thus doesn't require being setting-neutral, so why the hell SHOULDN'T we just call it what it is?

It's a magical girl. No matter how you try to deny it or how many alternate names you use for it, it's a fething magical girl.

If your DM wouldn't allow it as written he's not likely to allow it with MINOR COSMETIC CHANGES anyway, so don't bother beating around the bush. Just keep it simple.

They're magical girls, and that's all there is to it.