I would post early stuff, but I've only done two full avatars so far.
@gurgleflep: There are more things wrong with it, but the only thing I really care about is the color. The horror, the horrible color clashing. It kind of pushes the thought of anything else wrong with it out of my mind. If I look away I forget any other detail, besides it looked like an orc. Don't mean to bash you, and I understand it is an early work, but the colors.
On the plus side, there are a number of decent things about it. It seems to show some very strong basics.
Edit: The colors would probably work if it wasn't an orc. It's the green.