I didn't realized how hard my story line was going to be picked apart on these forums. No offense people but this is a futuristic fantasy game. I wasn't asking for input on my story line but rather some help with some additional content to the game. I'm sorry that some of you feel that my story line was not on par to standard shadowrun rules, but please read through my previous post again and realize that I clearly wrote that I played a "bastardized" version of the game. Now that all of the trolls have been addressed, thanks to those who actually gave some viable input.

Autolykos, I will be using some of your trap suggestions in my game I really like the idea of them walking into a room where the floor is covered in gasoline. I can see my players having fun with that scenario.