I don't have time to comment fully, but just one thing I spotted.

Quote Originally Posted by Ahrimon View Post
Feats:
lvl 1- Force sensitive
H-light armor
lvl 2- Jedi: lightsaber proficiency
lvl 3- Force training
lvl 3- Jedi: Force Training
Force Training isn't a Jedi bonus feat, so you can only take it as your character feat every third level. I understand this is intentional.

"Ship Teleporting" is called Fold Space and Folded Space Mastery.