So In my spare time I write sonnets I dont know why but I do. I noticed that there really wasn't a thread for poetry and I thought it would be nice to have a place to post poems and the like for feedback and other general comments from other posters so here is the first sonnet that I would like to share

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Open the eye that sees more than the truth
For it is the one that can truly see
Visions from the future it can bring forth
Yet dark mysteries are what it shows me

A past where spirits entertained mortals
An island that has been forever lost
Only the eye can open the portals
But to enter them you must pay the cost

The spirits now guard what was left behind
Yet my vision shows me there is much more
Something that the spirits will never find
A path that leads all the way to the shore

The soul can enter but then must remain
The truth only brings agony and pain