Yep, that does sound better. Has my approval/vote/support/like.
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DaggerPen, can I convince you to tag the thread with "spoilers"?
EDIT: Also, there is an unnecessary "[ /quote]" tag inside the "(937+) To Dwarven lands." spoiler tag
EDIT 2: and you might want to change the tag title to "(937-946)..." since you're there.
Grey Wolf