Ouch... Having to write it three times must be really annoying.

Nevertheless, this is amazing. Even though it seems less superhero and more horror. With the PC's as the monsters.

And I must say that my favourite characters are McCrow and Agent Mann. (At first I thought that was his superhero name. Agentman. With the powers of... Agents?) Especially Mann, when he doesn't care how powerful someone is and still tries to order them around.

It is also nice to see that at least Michael is not such violent criminal, like most of them.


but Tiffany tells him that he's not man enough to take it from her.
Really? telling Mann that he's not man enough? I guess now he hates here even more, for making this pun.