If those are supposed to be plain shoulders, they look like they have pads or armor. If they are supposed to have pads or armor... good job.
Did you watch the video? This is basically an anatomy lesson about how to portray bones and, as Thanqol said, exposed musculature. It's for being really accurate and catching all the details of a real subject.
School Fox by Atlur
Originally Posted by The Giant
Anarion's right on the money here.
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"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.”
Oscar Wilde Writer & Poet (1891)