Quote Originally Posted by Jeff the Green View Post
No worries; I expect any reviews of mine to take a while and I don't know how important experience with homebrew design is for critiquing it. I'm taking a look at yours right now; I need to head to bed, but at a first glance Bluydee is right (but I have some ideas to fix the MAD) and I'm kind of allergic to smites/day.
I'll probably have something written up for yours later today. I'm not sure how later. It's very, very interesting although somethings are missing important mechanical details, which is pretty much my only gripe.