Okay, first of all, thanks for being willing to do this.
The only thing that I'd really like changed is that he'd probably wouldn't be smirking. He's done a lot of awful stuff that he really regrets, he's generally pretty somber and down to earth. His current mission in life is to make sure he dies properly and doesn't become a lich, so that naturally puts a damper on... well, everything really. A mild frown suits him better.
Also, if it's possible could you make the robes a bit darker, and remove the gold circles and the white line, and replace the white line with gold. This isn't a big deal, just how I pictured my character's outfit.
Beyond that, I love this. Again, thank you so much for spending your time with this.
Edit: And could you also crop the beam somewhat? Look to the left