Wooli I'm going to have to request a less silly name be given to Undaroos but the writeup seems alright. Xeria could use some work, I think the term "evles" is probably inappropriate given there are no elves and that doesn't really describe the race and while I can see what you're going for the whole thing seems absurdly grimdark rather than realistic.

Reggie those regions look solid.

Aedilred I wouldn't mind some more in the people section even if it was just C&Ped out of the Sasanand writeup or a little bit about slight cultural variance.

Reader sorry to see you go. Hakeber will become unclaimed land with a standing army of 2,000. If you have anyone you want to grant a claim to, do so, otherwise it will have to be invaded or a claim fabricated. Whether the Hakeber region writeup is taken as canon or not will be determined by the player who ends up in control of the region.