Those lands seem too much better than the tri-lands. The biggest problem would be that a constructed format featuring those lands either has to not care about the fact that they have basic land types at all, which negates the purpose of printing them I would think, or it would necessarily be one where people can probably generate whatever colors of mana they want as long as they're willing to be a little bit slow. Or not even that slow, as sometimes those lands will be untapped incidentally.

You should definitely make sure the untap conditions are balanced; the Jund land has a much harsher untap condition than any of the others. To be realistic, while I understand that you went for flavor, all of them should really have the same untap condition and should probably not be plane specific, as dual lands are the sort of thing that you would want to be reprintable on another plane if such a thing were necessary.