I honestly wholeheartedly agree. The plot feels rush, and the "Agent of the Singularity" guy seemed to come out of nowhere (Though I could have missed some forshadowing).
No foreshadowing, not even a dramatic entrance. Just appeared over Faye's shoulder like a little cartoon devil, said 'let's just resolve this plot real quick' and vanished.
Spoiler: I've checked out the spoiler thoroughly and there's no actual erotic Harry Potter fanfiction
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Originally Posted by The Giant
I've checked out the comic thoroughly and there's no actual erotic Harry Potter fanfiction
Originally Posted by The Giant
I can't find the one with the "cartoon butt," though.
Originally Posted by The Giant
OK, finally tracked the Naked Superheroes guy down
Originally Posted by The Giant
What do you see as being objectionable about it? The use of the word "bimbos"?