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Thought she was great and the companions were fine!
Only problem I had was some of the plot.

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For example the Gathering Coil floating down the train carriage, the Doctor lands atop of it, it's ability to levitate functioning as an air bag explaining how she survived the fall.
When Ryan touched that symbol HE is selected as the target, but the Coil detects his grandmother so boards the train looking for her.
Due to a mix of being used as a cushion and then being electrocuted it tags Carl by mistake something Tim Sharr only realises as he is confronted by the Doctor.
Carl trips him up causing him to fall after handed back his teleport device.


Other than that I thought it was alright.
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Ryan wasn't the Coil's target at any point - Carl always was. What Ryan did was accidentally give permission for the Coil to materialise, I think? "DO YOU ALLOW THIS CREATURE TO MANIFEST Y/N" and Ryan clicked the alien version of "Y".