Tomb Busters 1: They didn't meet in an inn

[Willie the Duck]

The point where I really felt the need to complain about the plot, was when Vicky refused to join the team, adamantly so. Then joined the Team in the last second for no truly compelling reason other than Gordon teasing her about her life.

The whole thing seems very focused on showcasing the author's artistic skills, and the plot, characterizations, and basic motivations seem mostly nonexistent. Nice artwork though.

Edit: also- the shoalin team (in a flying Forbidden City) from ch.3, p.7 -- I'm sure they thought that was a thrilling homage, but to me it seemed pretty tone deaf.