Need a character background written up?

[Tawmis]

Ok, so he's just a Gruumsh analogue?
Also, I'm catching the parallels of him losing an eye, and Odin, which is often represented with one eye, maybe add in that they're brothers, but Khorus was "defective"

That would be a good twist too - that Odin came out all wonderful, great, and powerful - and his brother - perhaps a twin - came out disfigured and powerless, so there's always this hatred between them.