I like this idea but I'd recommend making a few changes to make it a little bit less stereotypical fantasy.

1) Twin Evil/Good wizards destroying the world: Been there done that. My personal recommendation is to leave exactly why the world was destroyed a mystery.

2) Children of the Light: To Robert Jordan. Why not go something a bit more ironic and call them the Peoples Democratic Republic of xxxxx (Africa inspired). Nothing says horrible dictatorship like your countries name saying you aren’t a horrible dictatorship.

3) Wizards mistrusted but really good: This is the case in about half the worlds out there. If you want to make wizards have a new and interesting relationship with the world you'll have to come up with something else.


One idea I had while reading this was the Moon could have exploded before hand and the shards of stability are actually based on chunks of the moon. The shards are sentient because each contains a portion of the moon goddesses mind.