Inconsistency-yet to be created webcomic

[Ichneumon]

Alright, I feel like making a webcomic again, and although I feel my OotS style ABR comics have attained a non-ugly level, I would prefere it not to be in that style as there are already way to many comics like that on this forum (al great though, I think they are fantastic and my art is far worse than Salmon's or Saturn's, but you understand my point) I already have a story so I only need to decide on the art style right now.

I am still experimenting, but I would like to know what you, my might-be future readers, think of the style. The first part of the story will mainly focus around a fox, a snake and a human (with a horse).

First try, style 1

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Second try, style 1

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First try, style 2

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