1. 2008-06-09, 08:38 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #61
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    Default Re: Team Kurina: The Hunt for the Red Shinobi!

    Kyoshin is torn between staying and going, but finally says, "I'll get a nurse. Be right back."

    The big genin steps outside the room and finds a nurse. "Excuse... excuse me, nurse-sama? Makatsui Anni-san is no longer in a coma. My teammate thinks someone should check in on her every so often. Also, could you, er, point me out to a doctor? I have some questions."

    Kyoshin's eyes shift back to the room, and he nervously shifts his feet.

    "I, um, don't mean to be rude, but it... it is rather urgent."
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    BladeofObliviom said:
    I've only seen a character at anything resembling this level of absurdity thrive exactly once, and he/she/what-the-jongo had the advantage of being written by Gengy, who I look up to as a writer.

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