One thing I would recommend: Less meta humor. It's not very funny and distracts from the cool story.
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2008-07-03, 12:41 PM (ISO 8601)Banned
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Re: Well That Was Unexpected. (backstory comic)
Re: Well That Was Unexpected. (backstory comic)
One thing I would recommend: Less meta humor. It's not very funny and distracts from the cool story.
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