I'm not American, so I don't know if I can really comment on that without making an ass out of myself.


I can nitpick though!

Panel 5: The speech bubbles are in the wrong order. When you read, you read from left to right. When the bubbles are in the wrong order, the dialouge gets all funny. It's a little frustrating to read. Don't worry though, this is an error I've seen in alot of comics Just try to keep it in mind.